A Bringer of New Things

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Let It In (99-word flash fiction)

Morning on the Seine by Claude Monet

Morning on the Seine by Claude Monet

Maggie shut her bedroom door and slumped against it. Who was she, anymore? The self-destructive habit that had lured her with its pleasing pain was now consuming her life. All she spoke were lies. All she heard was her mind telling her she was guilty. Horrible. Hopeless.

To drown it out, she switched on the radio and curled up on her bed. A song with a haunting melody came on, and an alto sang about forgiveness.

It just took one chorus. Maggie broke into heaving, cleansing sobs. She let in what, for so long, she had blocked out.

 Hope.


Written for Carrot Ranch’s weekly 99-word flash fiction challenge–this week, the topic is “it takes just one.”

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4 comments on “Let It In (99-word flash fiction)

  1. Charli Mills
    March 22, 2016

    Hope. Just one sliver of it makes all the difference. A beautiful flash!

    Liked by 1 person

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  3. Deepika Ramesh
    March 25, 2016

    This is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing. 🙂

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